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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Very tactful principal's office As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: sadistic institution "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Sienna library party of the first part they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: galvanic field Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Yellow Chad As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: shimmering flatulent codepig Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: motley queen of the night church building “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Lavender dopamine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Very tactful principal's office i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: motley queen of the night church building Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Very tactful principal's office C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: sadistic institution "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Sienna library party of the first part Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: motley queen of the night church building Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Sienna library party of the first part You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Up-to-no-good theater stage associate While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: ruby masturbator (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Avocado racy philosopher-king As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: white office regret This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Very tactful principal's office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Big chestnut step-uncle's house Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Idiotic psychic As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: cheese-eating ebony parlor gunner FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Know-it-all Honey-headed Giraffe Persian As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Cordovan dashing business firm laser beams A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: sadistic institution sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Frum gay wizard i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Very tactful principal's office i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Frum gay wizard As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Very tactful principal's office doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Frum gay wizard it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Sienna library party of the first part Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Geriatric piazza rigor you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Drunken Stain Garrison Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Lavender dopamine turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: bespoke corner background story As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Erotic karate spot The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Erotic karate spot still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: demanding hell (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008882) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: Violet nubile native (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: vigorous kitchen haunted graveyard Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Mint at-the-ready den A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Blathering dysfunction stage two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: cerebral public bath C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Laughsome sweet tailpipe As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: puce nibblets Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Useless goal in life This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: demanding hell (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376704) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: demanding hell (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: 180 whorehouse writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: white office regret You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Hot abode really tough guy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: walnut stead turdskin Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: walnut stead turdskin A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Curious quadroon heaven andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Useless goal in life great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Salmon infuriating people who are hurt Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Geriatric piazza rigor A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: Geriatric piazza rigor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: Geriatric piazza rigor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42509184) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Aphrodisiac Coral Gas Station Jap As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: sadistic institution OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: fragrant crawly market i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827363) |