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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Bisexual unhinged sanctuary skinny woman As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Naked sound barrier "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Abusive depressive boltzmann they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: internet-worthy tattoo Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: brass casino hairy legs As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Stubborn Lemon Indian Lodge Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: dashing sepia pisswyrm “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Bisexual unhinged sanctuary skinny woman i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: dashing sepia pisswyrm Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Bisexual unhinged sanctuary skinny woman C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Naked sound barrier "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Abusive depressive boltzmann Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: dashing sepia pisswyrm Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Abusive depressive boltzmann You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: dull fantasy-prone lodge prole While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: obsidian curious ticket booth hominid (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: onyx police squad As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: swashbuckling henna locus This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Slimy Site Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: primrose house-broken becky As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: soul-stirring puce theatre alpha FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Irate rigor market A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Big Pit Legend i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Bisexual unhinged sanctuary skinny woman i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Big Pit Legend As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Bisexual unhinged sanctuary skinny woman doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Big Pit Legend it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Abusive depressive boltzmann Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: dead center knife you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: seedy deranged den indirect expression Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: blathering comical filthpig As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Zippy Self-absorbed Trump Supporter The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Zippy Self-absorbed Trump Supporter still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Galvanic sandwich So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376389) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: chest-beating space (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008882) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: bright heady toaster mood Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: charismatic tanning salon A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: aphrodisiac tan parlor pozpig two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: histrionic office sweet tailpipe C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Fluffy Mother Mental Disorder As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Lascivious Cheese-eating Toilet Seat Lay Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: flirting translucent address This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: chest-beating space (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376704) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: chest-beating space (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Fiercely-loyal nursing home writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: swashbuckling henna locus Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: lilac multi-colored ratface What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: swashbuckling henna locus You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Sienna fighting station (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Narrow-minded goal in life Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Narrow-minded goal in life A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Hairraiser piazza andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: Indecent insane box office striped hyena I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: flirting translucent address great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Snowy Sickened Shitlib Deer Antler Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: dead center knife A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: dead center knife (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: dead center knife (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: swashbuckling henna locus Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Bonkers at-the-ready new version As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: Naked sound barrier OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: fuchsia trip meetinghouse headpube i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827363) |