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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Irate Rehab As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: smoky balding church "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Chest-beating locale partner they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Hairraiser Startled Meetinghouse Psychic Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: titillating half-breed headpube As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: flesh domesticated cuckold Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Adventurous new version “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Autistic kitty (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Irate Rehab i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Adventurous new version Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Irate Rehab C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: smoky balding church "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Chest-beating locale partner Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Adventurous new version Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Chest-beating locale partner You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Lascivious Nubile Set While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: laughsome judgmental point (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Ocher lodge corn cake As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Supple Aqua Dragon Stain This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Irate Rehab (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Well-lubricated crackhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: charismatic fuchsia sex offender locus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Razzle factory reset button sneaky criminal (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Scarlet Affirmative Action Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Vivacious cocky cuckoldry As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Mustard underhanded stag film preventive strike (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: mind-boggling philosopher-king (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: sienna confused gunner FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: indecent grizzly den electric furnace (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Supple Aqua Dragon Stain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: 180 pontificating base (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: odious institution idiot (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: Talented pozpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Well-lubricated crackhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: swashbuckling brilliant kitchen (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: indecent grizzly den electric furnace (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: indecent grizzly den electric furnace As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Autistic kitty i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Floppy Bearded Filthpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Autistic kitty i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: comical embarrassed to the bone menage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: exhilarant mint trailer park international law enforcement agency A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: flickering public bath (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: smoky balding church sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: poppy address i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Irate Rehab i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: poppy address As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Irate Rehab doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: poppy address it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Chest-beating locale partner Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: provocative mediation site you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: wonderful duck-like library fortuitous meteor Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Autistic kitty turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: flickering public bath (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: 180 pontificating base As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Racy ape whorehouse The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: exhilarant mint trailer park international law enforcement agency star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Racy ape whorehouse still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: Adventurous new version (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: mind-boggling philosopher-king Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Sable market community account A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: thriller gas station So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: thriller gas station Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376411) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: carnelian french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008886) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: honey-headed crawly spot (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722509) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:51 AM Author: laughsome judgmental point (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376432) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:18 AM Author: Well-lubricated crackhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376589) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:23 AM Author: Floppy Bearded Filthpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376641) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: carnelian french chef holy shit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376648) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Well-lubricated crackhouse attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376708) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:13 PM Author: exhilarant mint trailer park international law enforcement agency how (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377366) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:36 AM Author: swashbuckling brilliant kitchen (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722527) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: Supple Aqua Dragon Stain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376711) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: shimmering useless brakes patrolman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376866) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: bat shit crazy abusive stead (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376872) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:27 PM Author: Floppy Bearded Filthpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42378128) |
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Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: shimmering useless brakes patrolman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42558237) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: carnelian french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008882) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:05 AM Author: shimmering useless brakes patrolman this is incredible (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008910) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:39 PM Author: carnelian french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44032706) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: henna sexy dilemma stock car (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44453902) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:31 AM Author: honey-headed crawly spot wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722507) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: cowardly theater pistol (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722517) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: maniacal goyim crotch (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722548) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: Vibrant shrine High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376422) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: comical embarrassed to the bone menage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376672) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: histrionic windowlicker house Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Khaki vigorous theater stage sandwich A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: kink-friendly fragrant national two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: passionate hyperactive dog poop C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: diverse milky parlour potus As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: up-to-no-good digit ratio senate Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Floppy Bearded Filthpig This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: carnelian french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376704) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Supple Aqua Dragon Stain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376736) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: Angry wine becky cuck (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377648) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: carnelian french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Aphrodisiac immigrant heaven writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Supple Aqua Dragon Stain Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Ungodly Temple What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Supple Aqua Dragon Stain You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Well-lubricated crackhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: exciting indigo garrison Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: exciting indigo garrison A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Deep quadroon andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: Drab geriatric hunting ground indirect expression I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Floppy Bearded Filthpig great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Bonkers liquid oxygen Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: provocative mediation site A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: provocative mediation site (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: provocative mediation site (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: Supple Aqua Dragon Stain Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Electric hospital legend As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: smoky balding church OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Arousing ebony forum i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#49827363) |