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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: hyperactive self-absorbed office As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: exciting mental disorder partner "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: bronze hall they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: yellow laughsome foreskin idea he suggested Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Kink-friendly angry box office As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Splenetic potus fortuitous meteor Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: cracking cheese-eating base “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Cowardly Double Fault Main People (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: hyperactive self-absorbed office i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: cracking cheese-eating base Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: hyperactive self-absorbed office C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: exciting mental disorder partner "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: bronze hall Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: cracking cheese-eating base Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: bronze hall You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: bespoke aromatic resort goyim While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Effete charismatic national faggotry (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Boyish police squad As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: very tactful people who are hurt This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: hyperactive self-absorbed office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: misanthropic bateful area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: adventurous regret forum (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376526) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Red soggy trump supporter Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Anal aphrodisiac school wagecucks As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: swashbuckling cyan corner rigor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: coiffed sound barrier (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: stimulating dragon FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: very tactful people who are hurt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: infuriating thriller striped hyena ticket booth As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Cowardly Double Fault Main People i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: big business firm (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Cowardly Double Fault Main People i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Blathering sick hissy fit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: odious state A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: fantasy-prone dilemma place of business (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: exciting mental disorder partner sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Shaky Spectacular Telephone Public Bath i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: hyperactive self-absorbed office i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Shaky Spectacular Telephone Public Bath As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: hyperactive self-absorbed office doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Shaky Spectacular Telephone Public Bath it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: bronze hall Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Razzmatazz Peach Tanning Salon Twinkling Uncleanness you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Fear-inspiring crackhouse Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Cowardly Double Fault Main People turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: fantasy-prone dilemma place of business (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Glittery Cordovan Roommate Nibblets As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: honey-headed slap-happy market The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: odious state star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: honey-headed slap-happy market still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Multi-colored codepig As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: glassy stage ape Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Motley filthpig address A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Pearl Racy Boltzmann andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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