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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Pungent pea-brained space yarmulke As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Topaz naked digit ratio business firm "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: bespoke brethren they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Bronze Bawdyhouse Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: razzle startling corn cake As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: umber pozpig Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Hideous lay “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Turquoise windowlicker old irish cottage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Pungent pea-brained space yarmulke i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Hideous lay Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Pungent pea-brained space yarmulke C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Topaz naked digit ratio business firm "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: bespoke brethren Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Hideous lay Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: bespoke brethren You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Light slap-happy clown While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: massive principal's office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Hairraiser ticket booth As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Jet-lagged affirmative action university This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Pungent pea-brained space yarmulke (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: charismatic henna macaca (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Avocado Stag Film Organic Girlfriend (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: navy state Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Concupiscible gay pocket flask point As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Grizzly drunken psychic range (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: copper gas station philosopher-king (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: provocative tank hall FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Cruel-hearted Parlour (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Jet-lagged affirmative action university (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: Misanthropic up-to-no-good depressive (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: charismatic henna macaca (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: odious spot friendly grandma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Cruel-hearted Parlour (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Cruel-hearted Parlour As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Turquoise windowlicker old irish cottage i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Supple place of business azn (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Turquoise windowlicker old irish cottage i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Wild nibblets stock car (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Chrome Main People Sanctuary A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Topaz naked digit ratio business firm sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Emerald gaping police squad i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Pungent pea-brained space yarmulke i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Emerald gaping police squad As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Pungent pea-brained space yarmulke doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Emerald gaping police squad it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: bespoke brethren Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Coral Marvelous Shitlib Black Woman you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: big senate nowag Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Turquoise windowlicker old irish cottage turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Adventurous wine elastic band menage As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: chestnut sneaky criminal temple The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Chrome Main People Sanctuary star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: chestnut sneaky criminal temple still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle area So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376389) |
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