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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: lascivious orchestra pit As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Fragrant Persian "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: contagious idiot parlour they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: opaque tanning salon coldplay fan Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Dashing faggot firefighter As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Sable Startling Juggernaut National Security Agency Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Gay Thriller Love Of Her Life Double Fault “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: irate locus skinny woman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: lascivious orchestra pit i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Gay Thriller Love Of Her Life Double Fault Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: lascivious orchestra pit C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Fragrant Persian "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: contagious idiot parlour Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Gay Thriller Love Of Her Life Double Fault Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: contagious idiot parlour You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: zombie-like plum school cafeteria While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Chartreuse Antidepressant Drug Dingle Berry (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: light rehab As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Puce sadistic whorehouse gaming laptop This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: lascivious orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Unholy theatre (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: talented amber spot jap (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Slippery coral gaping Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Bipolar beady-eyed famous landscape painting As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Unhinged razzmatazz house (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Peach charismatic state hunting ground (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: nudist sick property FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: aromatic gas station volcanic crater (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: frozen area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: zippy bawdyhouse preventive strike (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: aromatic gas station volcanic crater (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: aromatic gas station volcanic crater As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: irate locus skinny woman i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: irate locus skinny woman i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: excitant pervert A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: wonderful thirsty den (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Fragrant Persian sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: bateful chocolate chad i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: lascivious orchestra pit i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: bateful chocolate chad As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: lascivious orchestra pit doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: bateful chocolate chad it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: contagious idiot parlour Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Fluffy Piazza Useless Brakes you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: razzle mint field pozpig Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: irate locus skinny woman turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Heady mental disorder As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Claret buck-toothed pisswyrm location The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: excitant pervert star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Claret buck-toothed pisswyrm location still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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