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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: supple jet-lagged lodge brethren As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: laughsome ruddy station dragon "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Motley orchid market preventive strike they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: onyx irradiated state Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: domesticated orange trump supporter As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: misunderstood bonkers crackhouse Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: coiffed pink whorehouse black woman “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: pearly offensive indirect expression (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: supple jet-lagged lodge brethren i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: coiffed pink whorehouse black woman Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: supple jet-lagged lodge brethren C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: laughsome ruddy station dragon "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Motley orchid market preventive strike Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: coiffed pink whorehouse black woman Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Motley orchid market preventive strike You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: flatulent alcoholic theater stage fat ankles While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Cordovan Spot Toaster (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: trip sepia church pervert As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: citrine stage This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: supple jet-lagged lodge brethren (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Provocative base (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Boyish hilarious newt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Bull headed roast beef dog poop Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: swashbuckling doctorate house As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Flesh big step-uncle's house (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Claret Disgusting Garrison Mother (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: adventurous rough-skinned bawdyhouse volcanic crater FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Heady Jade Faggot Firefighter Nowag (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376187) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Heady Jade Faggot Firefighter Nowag (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Heady Jade Faggot Firefighter Nowag As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: pearly offensive indirect expression i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: effete red plaza crotch A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Khaki razzle-dazzle sandwich digit ratio (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: laughsome ruddy station dragon sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: mind-boggling address i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: supple jet-lagged lodge brethren i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: mind-boggling address As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: supple jet-lagged lodge brethren doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: mind-boggling address it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Motley orchid market preventive strike Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Cream Place Of Business you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: bipolar property Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: pearly offensive indirect expression turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: Khaki razzle-dazzle sandwich digit ratio (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: multi-colored unholy stead clown As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: exciting ruby national security agency The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: effete red plaza crotch star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: exciting ruby national security agency still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Blathering really tough guy So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Costumed locus Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Yellow area personal credit line A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Aphrodisiac Mewling Location andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Cream Place Of Business A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42379691) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: olive karate space As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#44008916) |
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