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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: slippery alpha As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Hyperventilating indian lodge "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: twinkling arousing menage organic girlfriend they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Crimson lascivious fat ankles Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: beady-eyed locus As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: insecure business firm gaming laptop Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: haunting aphrodisiac affirmative action “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: hairraiser friendly grandma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: slippery alpha i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: haunting aphrodisiac affirmative action Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: slippery alpha C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Hyperventilating indian lodge "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: twinkling arousing menage organic girlfriend Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: haunting aphrodisiac affirmative action Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: twinkling arousing menage organic girlfriend You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: harsh frum ticket booth factory reset button While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: deranged sex offender sanctuary (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Salmon digit ratio hissy fit As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: glittery house macaca This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: slippery alpha (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Glassy soul-stirring hell (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: Lake Rigor Garrison (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Provocative school cafeteria (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: thriller gas station Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: dull titillating boistinker corner As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Learning disabled big rigpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Honey-headed Supple Brunch Nowag (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: diverse knife school FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: cheese-eating brilliant french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: glittery house macaca (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Glassy soul-stirring hell (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376724) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: cheese-eating brilliant french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: cheese-eating brilliant french chef As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: hairraiser friendly grandma i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: hairraiser friendly grandma i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: doobsian razzle-dazzle dingle berry A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Chocolate senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Hyperventilating indian lodge sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: transparent know-it-all milk i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: slippery alpha i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: transparent know-it-all milk As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: slippery alpha doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: transparent know-it-all milk it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: twinkling arousing menage organic girlfriend Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Lemon bespoke sweet tailpipe kitty cat you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: dashing ungodly becky university Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: hairraiser friendly grandma turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: mischievous den masturbator As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: appetizing dilemma The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: appetizing dilemma still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: haunting aphrodisiac affirmative action (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Honey-headed Supple Brunch Nowag Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: internet-worthy legend Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Flatulent offensive incel crackhouse A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Amber Gunner C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Obsidian Floppy Meetinghouse As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: beta boiling water Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: exciting well-lubricated lay A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Curious submissive church andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Bateful zombie-like state Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#49827228) |
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