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Here are a couple poems i wrote in 1995. lol i found them cleaning up.

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silver tank area
  02/18/18
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hyperactive walnut parlour
  02/18/18
i am embarrassed having read it
Glittery locus coffee pot
  02/18/18
you were like 27 back then.
Motley henna nibblets
  02/18/18
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Pale point old irish cottage
  02/18/18
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silver tank area
  02/18/18
you'd be a black great grandfather by now.
Motley henna nibblets
  02/18/18
cr. I am living like someone in the future w a 200 year lif...
silver tank area
  02/18/18
It's word for water is diminishment
Arousing judgmental center
  02/18/18
I remember i really liked that line. something like that was...
silver tank area
  02/18/18
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silver tank area
  02/18/18
This one is the best. The first one would be good if it star...
Mewling mint senate
  02/19/18
haha yeah. I guess so. I have more ... not with me, but at...
silver tank area
  02/19/18
I like this one
hateful deer antler international law enforcement agency
  02/19/18
Interesting - I didn't mind the first two but this one is a ...
underhanded regret legal warrant
  02/19/18
Yep, lawyer now. I know--its funny that you say that abo...
silver tank area
  02/19/18
Trying to make it look like a slug is a little much, but you...
Mewling mint senate
  02/19/18
lol yeah. heh. I was intimidated by any strict form but I w...
silver tank area
  02/19/18
lol that’s actually pretty good
Concupiscible psychic coldplay fan
  02/19/18
i like this one
Frozen 180 Wrinkle
  02/19/18
The others were terrible, this one is 180 (although the jury...
lake sickened cumskin
  02/28/18
Eh half of why any poem works is in the end unintentional, f...
silver tank area
  02/28/18
okay that one was fine
odious bossy keepsake machete abode
  03/02/18
this was good, spaceporn. repoast it, plz.
awkward cocky macaca
  04/24/18
I aim to please. imgurs giving me trouble right now but I wi...
silver tank area
  04/24/18
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silver tank area
  02/19/18
beautiful. thanks for sharing.
stimulating opaque voyeur ticket booth
  02/19/18
tyty Maybe I'll put up some more, from when I was in my l...
silver tank area
  02/19/18
Great writing for a small child!
Passionate mildly autistic digit ratio
  02/19/18
I know, rite!
silver tank area
  02/19/18
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silver tank area
  02/20/18
Wily niggers indeed
lake sickened cumskin
  02/28/18
180. I saw that too! Lol I knew what's up
silver tank area
  02/28/18
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silver tank area
  02/20/18
You published them?
odious bossy keepsake machete abode
  03/02/18
yeah, sorry to say--some of them I did, here and there.
silver tank area
  03/02/18
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silver tank area
  02/20/18
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silver tank area
  02/26/18
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silver tank area
  02/27/18
is there any money anymore in poetry? like fellowships or g...
plum laughsome stag film
  02/28/18
I guess. I know a few poets--most of them are hooked up wit...
silver tank area
  02/28/18
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Soul-stirring Pea-brained Native Codepig
  02/28/18
i get embarrassed reading people's poems about 99% of the ti...
snowy parlor national security agency
  02/28/18
Yeah, same here.
silver tank area
  02/28/18
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silver tank area
  02/28/18
man these are bad, but i dont like poetry generally
spectacular poppy partner
  02/28/18
Time well spent...
silver tank area
  02/28/18
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vigorous hairless hissy fit feces
  02/28/18
Literally shuddered reading these
razzle-dazzle turdskin mad cow disease
  02/28/18
Honestly, the average for most people "in" to writ...
silver tank area
  02/28/18
Screw the haters. We've seen those clowns struggle to string...
out-of-control hideous private investor
  02/28/18
Thanks man!
silver tank area
  02/28/18
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vigorous hairless hissy fit feces
  02/28/18
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spectacular poppy partner
  02/28/18
cr. lmao at LathamTouchedMe trying to get some dick.
bisexual thriller national haunted graveyard
  02/28/18
This sounds right. The slug one is ok tho.
Multi-colored Topaz Organic Girlfriend
  02/28/18
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silver tank area
  02/28/18
Love poem is verbatim third eye blind lyrics
Talented chocolate mother forum
  02/28/18
When i was in hs spanish class i told a dude i was an awesom...
silver tank area
  02/28/18
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silver tank area
  03/01/18
http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=3907655&mc=2...
silver tank area
  03/01/18
after a certain point humanities academics becomes less abou...
silver tank area
  03/02/18
It's about a small failure = "you have not failed at an...
odious bossy keepsake machete abode
  03/02/18
nah I just cut out the title for obvious reasons and wanted ...
silver tank area
  03/02/18
140 IQ, folks
histrionic office
  03/02/18
You should use more pronouns.
odious bossy keepsake machete abode
  03/02/18
Yeah I was on a "second person" "you" ki...
silver tank area
  03/02/18
100% of poetry is faggot. this is no different.
boyish apoplectic toaster
  03/02/18
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odious bossy keepsake machete abode
  03/03/18
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silver tank area
  03/03/18
GIRLS ARE SMILING FROM ESCALATORS
odious bossy keepsake machete abode
  03/03/18
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silver tank area
  03/03/18
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silver tank area
  03/03/18
Ah, poesy!
Exhilarant elite dragon puppy
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silver tank area
  03/05/18
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silver tank area
  03/20/18
abandoned this too early--seems like only a start. What a l...
silver tank area
  03/20/18
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silver tank area
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silver tank area
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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:40 PM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: hyperactive walnut parlour



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: Glittery locus coffee pot

i am embarrassed having read it

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: Motley henna nibblets

you were like 27 back then.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430826)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: Pale point old irish cottage



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: silver tank area

22

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:42 PM
Author: Motley henna nibblets

you'd be a black great grandfather by now.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430836)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:44 PM
Author: silver tank area

cr. I am living like someone in the future w a 200 year lifespan. Gotta cut that shit out.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430852)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:47 PM
Author: Arousing judgmental center

It's word for water is diminishment

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430866)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:50 PM
Author: silver tank area

I remember i really liked that line. something like that was a logical conclusion for the idea that rocks get broken up over time. So what would happen to the key inside. lol at me.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430887)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:59 PM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: Mewling mint senate

This one is the best. The first one would be good if it started with the word "Olympian"

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435803)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: silver tank area

haha yeah. I guess so. I have more ... not with me, but at home.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435811)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: hateful deer antler international law enforcement agency

I like this one

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435810)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:36 AM
Author: underhanded regret legal warrant

Interesting - I didn't mind the first two but this one is a little too kitschy.

And now you're a shitlawyer?

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435821)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:39 AM
Author: silver tank area

Yep, lawyer now.

I know--its funny that you say that about this one. Bros who aren't "into" poems generally like this one--which I wrote like I was doing a crossword puzzle, counting out syllables only. It also has some humor, which some of my poems of the time lacked. This was one of my earliest efforts.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435837)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:42 AM
Author: Mewling mint senate

Trying to make it look like a slug is a little much, but you were 20.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435851)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:45 AM
Author: silver tank area

lol yeah. heh. I was intimidated by any strict form but I was drawn to the discipline or puzzle aspect of it so I figured I would try something I thought would be easy. easier than a sonnet at least. Although even w sonnets, the more you practice, the better you get.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435865)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:39 AM
Author: Concupiscible psychic coldplay fan

lol that’s actually pretty good

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435839)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:56 AM
Author: Frozen 180 Wrinkle

i like this one

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435917)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:30 AM
Author: lake sickened cumskin

The others were terrible, this one is 180 (although the jury's out on whether the reason it's 180 are unintentional)

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504291)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:04 AM
Author: silver tank area

Eh half of why any poem works is in the end unintentional, fortuitous meteor, etc

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504634)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: odious bossy keepsake machete abode

okay that one was fine

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519367)



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Date: April 24th, 2018 3:59 PM
Author: awkward cocky macaca

this was good, spaceporn. repoast it, plz.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35910657)



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Date: April 24th, 2018 5:01 PM
Author: silver tank area

I aim to please. imgurs giving me trouble right now but I will

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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:28 AM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:37 AM
Author: stimulating opaque voyeur ticket booth

beautiful. thanks for sharing.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435828)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:40 AM
Author: silver tank area

tyty

Maybe I'll put up some more, from when I was in my late 20s. I'll keep them in this thread so as not to annoy the fuck out of people who don't care.

I wont put up any I actually published, for fear of getting outted by some doobs.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435842)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:41 AM
Author: Passionate mildly autistic digit ratio

Great writing for a small child!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435848)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:45 AM
Author: silver tank area

I know, rite!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435866)



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Date: February 20th, 2018 8:54 AM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:32 AM
Author: lake sickened cumskin

Wily niggers indeed

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504292)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: silver tank area

180. I saw that too! Lol I knew what's up

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504598)



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Date: February 20th, 2018 8:56 AM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: odious bossy keepsake machete abode

You published them?

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519363)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:00 AM
Author: silver tank area

yeah, sorry to say--some of them I did, here and there.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519382)



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Date: February 20th, 2018 2:35 PM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: February 26th, 2018 2:21 PM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: February 27th, 2018 9:30 AM
Author: silver tank area

Post removed by moderator for violating The Law of The Land.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35497325)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:51 AM
Author: plum laughsome stag film

is there any money anymore in poetry? like fellowships or grants or prizes and so on?

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504306)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: silver tank area

I guess. I know a few poets--most of them are hooked up with universities as teachers, or the spouse makes the money, or there's a trust fund, or some combination of all three. There's usually $5K here and there in prize money those guys occasionally pick up every couple of years. Def not something you can raise a family on though.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504729)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:25 AM
Author: Soul-stirring Pea-brained Native Codepig



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504289)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 5:33 AM
Author: snowy parlor national security agency

i get embarrassed reading people's poems about 99% of the time.

this is no exception.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504320)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:37 AM
Author: silver tank area

Yeah, same here.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504548)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:29 AM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:40 AM
Author: spectacular poppy partner

man these are bad, but i dont like poetry generally

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504559)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: silver tank area

Time well spent...

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504601)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:42 AM
Author: vigorous hairless hissy fit feces



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:00 AM
Author: razzle-dazzle turdskin mad cow disease

Literally shuddered reading these

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504605)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:12 AM
Author: silver tank area

Honestly, the average for most people "in" to writing poetry is WAY worse. Not praising myself, just keeping it real. Go to any open mic night. Holy fuck. Bunch of retards. Same goes for most schools lit mags.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504667)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:25 AM
Author: out-of-control hideous private investor

Screw the haters. We've seen those clowns struggle to string together a few coherent sentences. These are really good for an amateur writer. Great command of language, nice imagery, fun rhythm.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504698)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:31 AM
Author: silver tank area

Thanks man!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504714)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: vigorous hairless hissy fit feces



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: spectacular poppy partner



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504723)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:54 PM
Author: bisexual thriller national haunted graveyard

cr. lmao at LathamTouchedMe trying to get some dick.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509625)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:59 PM
Author: Multi-colored Topaz Organic Girlfriend

This sounds right. The slug one is ok tho.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509649)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:51 PM
Author: silver tank area

Post removed by moderator for violating The Law of The Land.

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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:59 PM
Author: Talented chocolate mother forum

Love poem is verbatim third eye blind lyrics

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509651)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:07 PM
Author: silver tank area

When i was in hs spanish class i told a dude i was an awesome poet and i wrote out the lyrics to john lennon's images of broken light song and passed it to him and he read it and nodded

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509707)



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Date: March 1st, 2018 6:54 PM
Author: silver tank area



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35516814)



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Date: March 1st, 2018 7:02 PM
Author: silver tank area

http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=3907655&mc=2&forum_id=2

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35516854)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:54 AM
Author: silver tank area

after a certain point humanities academics becomes less about how much you know or how talented you are and more about how gay-sexy you can be.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519351)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:03 AM
Author: odious bossy keepsake machete abode

It's about a small failure = "you have not failed at anything colossal"

Way to turn text into subtext, spaceporn.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519400)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:05 AM
Author: silver tank area

nah I just cut out the title for obvious reasons and wanted to be clear what the poem was about, notwitstanding

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519413)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:56 AM
Author: histrionic office

140 IQ, folks

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519355)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: odious bossy keepsake machete abode

You should use more pronouns.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519358)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: silver tank area

Yeah I was on a "second person" "you" kick for a long time. I don't know--it just had that "talking to myself" quality that I liked.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519369)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:55 AM
Author: boyish apoplectic toaster

100% of poetry is faggot. this is no different.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519645)



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 11:58 AM
Author: odious bossy keepsake machete abode



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:08 PM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:10 PM
Author: odious bossy keepsake machete abode

GIRLS ARE SMILING FROM ESCALATORS

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35526551)



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:12 PM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:16 PM
Author: silver tank area



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:19 PM
Author: Exhilarant elite dragon puppy

Ah, poesy!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35526583)



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Date: March 5th, 2018 9:59 AM
Author: silver tank area



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35537867)



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:12 AM
Author: silver tank area



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35643966)



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:23 AM
Author: silver tank area

abandoned this too early--seems like only a start. What a lazy bastard I was.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35643994)



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:14 AM
Author: silver tank area



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35643971)



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Date: March 26th, 2018 12:48 PM
Author: silver tank area



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35691483)



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Date: March 26th, 2018 12:52 PM
Author: silver tank area



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35691528)