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Here are a couple poems i wrote in 1995. lol i found them cleaning up.

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clear space
  02/18/18
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Stubborn temple alpha
  02/18/18
i am embarrassed having read it
Passionate Very Tactful Theater Mental Disorder
  02/18/18
you were like 27 back then.
transparent incel
  02/18/18
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internet-worthy appetizing pisswyrm public bath
  02/18/18
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clear space
  02/18/18
you'd be a black great grandfather by now.
transparent incel
  02/18/18
cr. I am living like someone in the future w a 200 year lif...
clear space
  02/18/18
It's word for water is diminishment
Multi-colored cumskin
  02/18/18
I remember i really liked that line. something like that was...
clear space
  02/18/18
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clear space
  02/18/18
This one is the best. The first one would be good if it star...
opaque mother tanning salon
  02/19/18
haha yeah. I guess so. I have more ... not with me, but at...
clear space
  02/19/18
I like this one
rose frisky plaza genital piercing
  02/19/18
Interesting - I didn't mind the first two but this one is a ...
bright ape
  02/19/18
Yep, lawyer now. I know--its funny that you say that abo...
clear space
  02/19/18
Trying to make it look like a slug is a little much, but you...
opaque mother tanning salon
  02/19/18
lol yeah. heh. I was intimidated by any strict form but I w...
clear space
  02/19/18
lol that’s actually pretty good
Excitant nibblets
  02/19/18
i like this one
cerise frozen stag film azn
  02/19/18
The others were terrible, this one is 180 (although the jury...
Amber infuriating jewess
  02/28/18
Eh half of why any poem works is in the end unintentional, f...
clear space
  02/28/18
okay that one was fine
Supple abode
  03/02/18
this was good, spaceporn. repoast it, plz.
obsidian comical business firm
  04/24/18
I aim to please. imgurs giving me trouble right now but I wi...
clear space
  04/24/18
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clear space
  02/19/18
beautiful. thanks for sharing.
gay trip nursing home liquid oxygen
  02/19/18
tyty Maybe I'll put up some more, from when I was in my l...
clear space
  02/19/18
Great writing for a small child!
rusted mexican national security agency
  02/19/18
I know, rite!
clear space
  02/19/18
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clear space
  02/20/18
Wily niggers indeed
Amber infuriating jewess
  02/28/18
180. I saw that too! Lol I knew what's up
clear space
  02/28/18
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clear space
  02/20/18
You published them?
Supple abode
  03/02/18
yeah, sorry to say--some of them I did, here and there.
clear space
  03/02/18
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clear space
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clear space
  02/27/18
is there any money anymore in poetry? like fellowships or g...
Dead laughsome point
  02/28/18
I guess. I know a few poets--most of them are hooked up wit...
clear space
  02/28/18
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Cerebral sanctuary fortuitous meteor
  02/28/18
i get embarrassed reading people's poems about 99% of the ti...
hideous box office masturbator
  02/28/18
Yeah, same here.
clear space
  02/28/18
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clear space
  02/28/18
man these are bad, but i dont like poetry generally
Dun Coffee Pot Ratface
  02/28/18
Time well spent...
clear space
  02/28/18
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Lemon Mad Cow Disease Stage
  02/28/18
Literally shuddered reading these
aggressive beta spot
  02/28/18
Honestly, the average for most people "in" to writ...
clear space
  02/28/18
Screw the haters. We've seen those clowns struggle to string...
Aromatic becky
  02/28/18
Thanks man!
clear space
  02/28/18
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Lemon Mad Cow Disease Stage
  02/28/18
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Dun Coffee Pot Ratface
  02/28/18
cr. lmao at LathamTouchedMe trying to get some dick.
Sienna Well-lubricated Philosopher-king Native
  02/28/18
This sounds right. The slug one is ok tho.
Startling disturbing nowag
  02/28/18
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clear space
  02/28/18
Love poem is verbatim third eye blind lyrics
Fishy stirring bawdyhouse volcanic crater
  02/28/18
When i was in hs spanish class i told a dude i was an awesom...
clear space
  02/28/18
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clear space
  03/01/18
http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=3907655&mc=2...
clear space
  03/01/18
after a certain point humanities academics becomes less abou...
clear space
  03/02/18
It's about a small failure = "you have not failed at an...
Supple abode
  03/02/18
nah I just cut out the title for obvious reasons and wanted ...
clear space
  03/02/18
140 IQ, folks
glittery sandwich kitty cat
  03/02/18
You should use more pronouns.
Supple abode
  03/02/18
Yeah I was on a "second person" "you" ki...
clear space
  03/02/18
100% of poetry is faggot. this is no different.
Bistre senate
  03/02/18
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Supple abode
  03/03/18
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clear space
  03/03/18
GIRLS ARE SMILING FROM ESCALATORS
Supple abode
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clear space
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clear space
  03/03/18
Ah, poesy!
citrine odious station psychic
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clear space
  03/20/18
abandoned this too early--seems like only a start. What a l...
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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:40 PM
Author: clear space



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: Stubborn temple alpha



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: Passionate Very Tactful Theater Mental Disorder

i am embarrassed having read it

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: transparent incel

you were like 27 back then.

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: internet-worthy appetizing pisswyrm public bath



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: clear space

22

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:42 PM
Author: transparent incel

you'd be a black great grandfather by now.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430836)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:44 PM
Author: clear space

cr. I am living like someone in the future w a 200 year lifespan. Gotta cut that shit out.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430852)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:47 PM
Author: Multi-colored cumskin

It's word for water is diminishment

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:50 PM
Author: clear space

I remember i really liked that line. something like that was a logical conclusion for the idea that rocks get broken up over time. So what would happen to the key inside. lol at me.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430887)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:59 PM
Author: clear space



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: opaque mother tanning salon

This one is the best. The first one would be good if it started with the word "Olympian"

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435803)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: clear space

haha yeah. I guess so. I have more ... not with me, but at home.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435811)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: rose frisky plaza genital piercing

I like this one

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435810)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:36 AM
Author: bright ape

Interesting - I didn't mind the first two but this one is a little too kitschy.

And now you're a shitlawyer?

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435821)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:39 AM
Author: clear space

Yep, lawyer now.

I know--its funny that you say that about this one. Bros who aren't "into" poems generally like this one--which I wrote like I was doing a crossword puzzle, counting out syllables only. It also has some humor, which some of my poems of the time lacked. This was one of my earliest efforts.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435837)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:42 AM
Author: opaque mother tanning salon

Trying to make it look like a slug is a little much, but you were 20.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435851)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:45 AM
Author: clear space

lol yeah. heh. I was intimidated by any strict form but I was drawn to the discipline or puzzle aspect of it so I figured I would try something I thought would be easy. easier than a sonnet at least. Although even w sonnets, the more you practice, the better you get.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435865)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:39 AM
Author: Excitant nibblets

lol that’s actually pretty good

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435839)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:56 AM
Author: cerise frozen stag film azn

i like this one

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435917)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:30 AM
Author: Amber infuriating jewess

The others were terrible, this one is 180 (although the jury's out on whether the reason it's 180 are unintentional)

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504291)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:04 AM
Author: clear space

Eh half of why any poem works is in the end unintentional, fortuitous meteor, etc

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504634)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: Supple abode

okay that one was fine

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519367)



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Date: April 24th, 2018 3:59 PM
Author: obsidian comical business firm

this was good, spaceporn. repoast it, plz.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35910657)



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Date: April 24th, 2018 5:01 PM
Author: clear space

I aim to please. imgurs giving me trouble right now but I will

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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:28 AM
Author: clear space



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:37 AM
Author: gay trip nursing home liquid oxygen

beautiful. thanks for sharing.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435828)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:40 AM
Author: clear space

tyty

Maybe I'll put up some more, from when I was in my late 20s. I'll keep them in this thread so as not to annoy the fuck out of people who don't care.

I wont put up any I actually published, for fear of getting outted by some doobs.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435842)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:41 AM
Author: rusted mexican national security agency

Great writing for a small child!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435848)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:45 AM
Author: clear space

I know, rite!

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Date: February 20th, 2018 8:54 AM
Author: clear space



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:32 AM
Author: Amber infuriating jewess

Wily niggers indeed

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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: clear space

180. I saw that too! Lol I knew what's up

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504598)



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Date: February 20th, 2018 8:56 AM
Author: clear space



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: Supple abode

You published them?

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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:00 AM
Author: clear space

yeah, sorry to say--some of them I did, here and there.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519382)



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Date: February 20th, 2018 2:35 PM
Author: clear space



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Date: February 26th, 2018 2:21 PM
Author: clear space



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Date: February 27th, 2018 9:30 AM
Author: clear space

Post removed by moderator for violating The Law of The Land.

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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:51 AM
Author: Dead laughsome point

is there any money anymore in poetry? like fellowships or grants or prizes and so on?

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504306)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: clear space

I guess. I know a few poets--most of them are hooked up with universities as teachers, or the spouse makes the money, or there's a trust fund, or some combination of all three. There's usually $5K here and there in prize money those guys occasionally pick up every couple of years. Def not something you can raise a family on though.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504729)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:25 AM
Author: Cerebral sanctuary fortuitous meteor



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Date: February 28th, 2018 5:33 AM
Author: hideous box office masturbator

i get embarrassed reading people's poems about 99% of the time.

this is no exception.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504320)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:37 AM
Author: clear space

Yeah, same here.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504548)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:29 AM
Author: clear space



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:40 AM
Author: Dun Coffee Pot Ratface

man these are bad, but i dont like poetry generally

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504559)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: clear space

Time well spent...

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504601)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:42 AM
Author: Lemon Mad Cow Disease Stage



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:00 AM
Author: aggressive beta spot

Literally shuddered reading these

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504605)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:12 AM
Author: clear space

Honestly, the average for most people "in" to writing poetry is WAY worse. Not praising myself, just keeping it real. Go to any open mic night. Holy fuck. Bunch of retards. Same goes for most schools lit mags.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504667)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:25 AM
Author: Aromatic becky

Screw the haters. We've seen those clowns struggle to string together a few coherent sentences. These are really good for an amateur writer. Great command of language, nice imagery, fun rhythm.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504698)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:31 AM
Author: clear space

Thanks man!

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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: Lemon Mad Cow Disease Stage



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: Dun Coffee Pot Ratface



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:54 PM
Author: Sienna Well-lubricated Philosopher-king Native

cr. lmao at LathamTouchedMe trying to get some dick.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509625)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:59 PM
Author: Startling disturbing nowag

This sounds right. The slug one is ok tho.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509649)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:51 PM
Author: clear space

Post removed by moderator for violating The Law of The Land.

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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:59 PM
Author: Fishy stirring bawdyhouse volcanic crater

Love poem is verbatim third eye blind lyrics

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509651)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:07 PM
Author: clear space

When i was in hs spanish class i told a dude i was an awesome poet and i wrote out the lyrics to john lennon's images of broken light song and passed it to him and he read it and nodded

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509707)



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Date: March 1st, 2018 6:54 PM
Author: clear space



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Date: March 1st, 2018 7:02 PM
Author: clear space

http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=3907655&mc=2&forum_id=2

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35516854)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:54 AM
Author: clear space

after a certain point humanities academics becomes less about how much you know or how talented you are and more about how gay-sexy you can be.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519351)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:03 AM
Author: Supple abode

It's about a small failure = "you have not failed at anything colossal"

Way to turn text into subtext, spaceporn.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519400)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:05 AM
Author: clear space

nah I just cut out the title for obvious reasons and wanted to be clear what the poem was about, notwitstanding

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519413)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:56 AM
Author: glittery sandwich kitty cat

140 IQ, folks

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519355)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: Supple abode

You should use more pronouns.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519358)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: clear space

Yeah I was on a "second person" "you" kick for a long time. I don't know--it just had that "talking to myself" quality that I liked.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519369)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:55 AM
Author: Bistre senate

100% of poetry is faggot. this is no different.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519645)



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 11:58 AM
Author: Supple abode



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:08 PM
Author: clear space



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35526545)



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:10 PM
Author: Supple abode

GIRLS ARE SMILING FROM ESCALATORS

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35526551)



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:12 PM
Author: clear space



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:16 PM
Author: clear space



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:19 PM
Author: citrine odious station psychic

Ah, poesy!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35526583)



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Date: March 5th, 2018 9:59 AM
Author: clear space



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:12 AM
Author: clear space



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:23 AM
Author: clear space

abandoned this too early--seems like only a start. What a lazy bastard I was.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35643994)



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:14 AM
Author: clear space



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Date: March 26th, 2018 12:48 PM
Author: clear space



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Date: March 26th, 2018 12:52 PM
Author: clear space



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